We wrote narratives about the
Olympic games. We had to plan the
orientation, problem solution and other ideas for our story.
Here are three great jobs!
I went to the Olympic games
in London. I went there in 2012.I went
there with my Mum, Dad and my brothers and sister. I went with my cousins too. I did synchronised swimming. I had to hold my breath for a minute. I really wanted to get the gold medal. It was my turn. I did ballet in the water. The rest of my team pulled me out of the
water and I did a flip. I hopped out of
the pool. I won a gold medal.
J.L
On the first week of the
2012 Olympics I qualified for the 400m sprint.
I badly wanted to beat Usain Bolt’s world record of 19.25. My coach wanted me to win gold. I could my Mum and Dad and my fans. “On you marks, get set” BANG! I got out of the gates and I was fifth
place. I sped up past 4th,
then 3rd, then 2nd, then I was first on the last
300m. I could hear my coach saying “go
on, you can beat the world record and get gold.” Also my Dad was saying “come on son, you can
get the shiny gold medal you wanted so much.”
It popped straight into my mind and it made me go faster and faster and
faster. I was only 200m from gold for
the New Zealand Olympic team. I could
hear every single person in the stadium.
There was only 100m left and my Dad shouted, “run, boy, run!” and I got
gold and I beat the world record. It was
19.00 flat and my coach was jumping up and down and as soon as I crossed the
line the crowd went YAY! Usain Bolt was
really upset and he whispered to me, “I’ll get you next time”
J.H
Today I am going to the
Olympic Games to kite surf. I’m going
with my family, coach and friends. I’m
finally there. Tomorrow is the big day…
the Olympics. Most of today I was
training with my coach (Dad) I’m so
nervous and happy that I’m competing.
I’m hoping I can verse the best man in the World. Today’s the big day…I’m hoping to get a gold
medal. I had to get my kite ready.
Ready, set, bang! Off I went. I
did some cool tricks. They gave me an 8,
9, 7. I was okay with that score which
is 24. At least I got through. With
second place. Next round… Ready, set, bang! Off I went with my kite, as fast as
lightning. I did a one hand twist. They gave a 9, 9, 8. That was better than last time. That score was 26. Now I’m in the semi-finals… Ready, set,
bang! I was off! The crowd was as crazy as dogs barking
non-stop. I did a twist flip. They gave me a 9, 9, 9 which is one better than
last time. The score is 27. Now I’m in the finals. Ready, set, bang! I did a 360 twirl back flip. “Yay!” I came first place. They gave me a 20, 20, 30 which is 70. I came first place and it’s my first Olympic
Games. Later… it’s the medal
ceremony. I’m walking in the middle
which means I’m first place. “William
Holland for New Zealand gets a gold medal.”
I’m crying with joy. They take my
photo. The judge says “now for the New
Zealand National Anthem. That’s my
story.
W.H